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(2019·洛阳、许昌质量检测)One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we travel to Hong Kong by high-speed rail. We arrived at there in the afternoon. Felt excited and satisfied, I stood at Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour with my friends, enjoying the last rays of the sun. A few years after, I stood in this same spot for first time with my mother. It was the same beautifully night and the same gentle breeze, and a totally different me. Now, I'm no much a child following my parents, but a young adult who can make decisions by himself. 答案：
One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we travel to Hong
travel?l?edKong by high-speed rail. We arrived at there in the afternoon. Fel t excited and
Feelingsatisfied, I stood at Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour with my friend s， enjoying the
friend last rays of the sun. A few years after， I stood in this same spot for ∧ first
agothetime with my mother. It was the same beautifully night and the same gentle breeze, beautifuland a totally different me. Now, I'm no much a child following my parents, but a young butmoreadult who can make decisions by himself.
myself
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(2019·山西八校第三次联考)Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday the next month? If you hadn't arranged anything, come to the concert holding by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The only problem is when the performance starts quite lately—at nine p．m. We can take a bus there, so there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night. 答案：
Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday the next month? If you hadn't
haven't
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arranged anything, come to the concert holding by my favorite band in the city stadium.
heldI'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be ∧ Sunday. Clearly it will
onbe a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The only problem
ticketssellingis when the performance starts quite lately—at nine p．m. We can take a bus there,
thatlateso there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad to pick us butmyup and you can stay in my home for the night.
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(2019·山东潍坊一模)School life is a large part of my adolescence. I have learned how to get on well with my fellow schoolmate and teachers at school. It's quite usual what arguments happen between students. For an example, we may have different opinions when it come to organizing an activity. However, we have to learn to respect other people's opinions and think about it carefully. It is necessary for us to have a discussion after we make a final decision. School life had really taught me how to communicate each other. It will certain play an important role in help me find a good job in the future. 答案：
School life is a large part of my adolescence. I have learned how to get on well with my fellow schoolmate and teachers at school. It's quite usual what arguments happen
schoolmatesthatbetween students. For an example, we may have different opinions when it come to
comesorganizing an activity. However, we have to learn to respect other people's opinions and think about it carefully. It is necessary for us to have a discussion after
thembeforewe make a final decision. School life had really taught me how to communicate ∧
haswitheach other. It will certain play an important role in help me find a good job
certainlyhelpingin the future.
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