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专题限时训练(四十七) [应用文型短文改错(一)]
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(一)
Manager，
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make some improvement.
Yours faithfully， Li Hua
(二)
Dear Smith，
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I had been offered a job at a company in England for my good performance. About one thousand graduates took exam for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my mother is not happy about it. She is strong against my going there. She says it is so far away that she won't see me for all the year and she is afraid I will feel lonely. She can't imagine such young a girl live alone. She advises me to work in Beijing instead. Then I'll be able to continue living for her. How can I persuade him to accept the fact I am an adult?
Best wishes. Mary
(三)
Dear friends，
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse other than better. Our life and health have affected greatly. The earth is our home, but we have a duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but for future generations. Fortunate, more and more people have become aware of this problem. Many effectively measures have been taken by the government to deal with them.
As a student, I think we should do what we can improve the environment. First, go to school on feet or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn on the lights and other electrical appliances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there.
It's time that we did something to protecting our environment.
▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓
▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌精诚凝聚 =^_^= 成就梦想 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌
专题限时训练(四十七)
(一)
Manager，
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very wellgood, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problemproblems in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so muchmany advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyedannoying. Second, the sound of the film was tooso loud that I could hardly bear ∧it. The EXIT signssign could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terriblyterrible should happen, it willwould be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing athe letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make some improvement.
Yours faithfully， Li Hua
(二)
Dear Smith，
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I hadhave been offered a job at a company in England for my good performance. About one thousand graduates took examexams for it, but only a few waswere chosen and I was one of them. However, my mother is not happy about it. She is strongstrongly against my going there. She says it is so far away that she won't see me for all the year and she is afraid I will feel lonely. She can't imagine suchso young a girl liveliving alone. She advises me to work in Beijing instead. Then I'll be able to continue living forwith her. How can I persuade himher to accept the fact ∧that I am an adult?
Best wishes. Mary
(三)
Dear friends，
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse otherrather than better. Our life and health have ∧been affected greatly. The earth is our home, butand/so we have a duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but for future generations. FortunateFortunately, more and more people have become aware of this problem. Many effectivelyeffective measures have been taken by the government to deal with themit.
As a student, I think we should do what we can ∧to improve the environment. First, go to school on feetfoot or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn onoff the lights and other electrical appliances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there.
It's time that we did something to protectingprotect our environment.
▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓
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