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(2015·郑州第三次质量预测)About a month ago，I was walking alone on the beach in the evening.I have already finished my homework，and I wanted to relax.Suddenly，I saw two children stand on the beach.They seem to have found something made of metal，which was big and reddish－brown.When I took a look at it，I knew immediate that it was an old bomb！I told them to move away the bomb.Fortunately，I had a mobile phone around with me，so I called the police and told them that had been found.About 15 minutes late，the police arrived.I was praised for it but then I went home.The next day，I heard that the police had blown the bomb up.It had been on the sand for over 60 years!
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I was asked to be a student teacher last week.My China teacher required me to give a lesson in my class.It was a first time that I had stood before class.I was thankful for her，because I had dreamed to be a teacher all the time.Considered that the class wouldn’t listen to me，I felt so nervous that I could fall asleep the night before.On the morning to give the lesson，I found it heavy to move my foot.At first，I can hardly speak fluently.Otherwise，I found myself much more relaxed gradually，because my classmates looked at me encouragingly.Finally，I finished the lesson smooth.I will remember my this experience forever.
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(2015·河南毕业班高考适应性练习) Dear Li Ping，
How time flies！It is two months that I left China and came to London.
As you know it，London is the capital of Britain，which is on the bank of River Thames.It’s a big city with a population of about 7 millions.It’s also a very busy place.People here are usually friendly and helpfully，but they are often in hurry.What have impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing.Now I understand why the English people always talked about the weather.London has many famous places of interests for people to visit.I have just gone to British Museum and Hyde Park recently.
How are things going with yourself？I miss you and our friends very much.I hope I can hear from you as often as I can.
Best wishes!
Yours， Wang Lin
答案：
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(2015·太原第二阶段测评) Dear Linda，
I’m so exciting and happy to hear that you’re coming to China.Since your trip is scheduled for the middle of July，time is not a problem for me because of I will be having my summer vacation at that time.
I’ve been very busy recently，for I’ve been preparing for coming exam，which is vitally for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest intend for high school students all over the province and I win the first prize.I’ve always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in English－speaking countries like your to practise and improve my English.However，I also want to make friend with people from other countries.
I am looking forward to see you.
Yours， Dai Hong
答案：
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Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road.Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion.
Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient.Beside，it helps improve the image of our city.But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution.How should we pull it down？The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city.We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.
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(2016·齐鲁名校高三第一次联考)My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team.We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.Also，the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从) .Each player must obey a captain，which is the leader of the team.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
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(2016·陕西一联) Dear Tim，
I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and I’ll graduate this summer.I’m eighteen year old.
There is three people in my family and I’m the only one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together.
I’m cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，basketball
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