专题二 短文改错
Passage 1
(2015·东北三省四市二模)
Dear Mum，
This afternoon, our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us. I write down a lot of good sides.
Time passes quickly，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school student. Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate for your support. I know that without your properly guidance，I would not have done so well.
However, what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand. I really need your help.
Kate
答案： Dear Mum，
This afternoon, our teacher asked us ∧ list what our parents had done for us.
toI write down a lot of good sides. wrote
Time passes quickly，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school
doesn'tsincestudent. Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate
progressfor your support. I know that without your properly guidance，I would not have done
properso well.
However, what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top
puzzledauniversity come true.Please continue to lend I a hand. I really need your help.
me
Kate
文章大意：本文是一封书信。Kate按照老师的要求，给妈妈写了一封信，表达自己的感激之情。
1．命题立意：考查不定式作宾语补足语。
解析：list前加to ask sb. to do sth.请某人干某事。 2. 命题立意：考查动词的时态。
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解析：write→wrote 根据上文语意，此处应该为发生在过去的动作。 3. 命题立意：考查反意问句。
解析：isn't→doesn't 本句的谓语动词是实义动词passes，故反意问句中用助动词doesn't。
4. 命题立意：考查时间状语从句。
解析：when→since It is＋一段时间＋since...为固定结构。 5. 命题立意：考查名词。
解析：progresses→progress progress为抽象名词，不可数。 6. 命题立意：考查动词。
解析：去掉for appreciate为及物动词，可直接接宾语，不需要介词。 7. 命题立意：考查形容词和副词。
解析：properly→proper 此处应用形容词来修饰名词guidance。 8. 命题立意：考查分词作宾语补足语。
解析：puzzling→puzzled 此处应用过去分词来补充说明“me”自身的感受。 9. 命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：the→a 此处应用不定冠词表示泛指，意为“一所”，而非特指。 10．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：I→me此处应用人称代词的宾格me来作lend的宾语。
Passage 2
(2015·东北三省三校第二次联合模拟)
The Magic Tree House series are among the most popular book series ever writing for Children. It tells a story of two kids, Jack and his sister Annie，seem to be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. A tree house is magic and can transport him to various places and various times in History. It turned out that King Athur from Camelot needs help.However，Jack's head librarians，Morgan le Fay，sends him and Annie to help.They end up go to many different places and time periods through history on their adventures，which attract to readers a lot. The series so far has had over 40 books and is likely to grow.
答案：
The Magic Tree House series are among the most popular book series ever writing
iswrittenfor Children. It tells a story of two kids. Jack and his sister Annie, ∧ seem to
whobe very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. A tree house is magic
The
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and can transport him to various places and various times in History. It turned
themturnsout that King Athur from Camelot needs help.However，Jack's head librarians，
Therefore/ThuslibrarianMorgan le Fay，sends him and Annie to help.They end up go to many different places
goingand time periods through history on their adventures，which attract to readers a lot. The series so far has had over 40 books and is likely to grow.
文章大意：本文是一说明文。本文主要介绍了The Magic Tree House《神奇书屋》，这本书深受孩子们的喜爱，它描述了一对小兄妹杰克与安妮的冒险故事??。
1．命题立意：考查be动词辨析。
解析：are→is The Magic Tree House series是一本书的名字，作主语，动词用单数。
2．命题立意：考查动词的过去分词。
解析：writing→written 过去分词表被动，因此writing改为written。 3．命题立意：考查非限制性定语从句。
解析：seem前加who 先行词是人，非限制性语从句引导词用who。 4．命题立意：考查冠词辨析。
解析：A→The a表泛指，the表特指。前面已经提到过的，再次提到用the表特指。 5．命题立意：考查代词辨析。
解析：him→them这里的宾语指的是Jack and his sister Annie，因此代词用them。 6．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：turned→turns叙述故事全篇都用一般现在时态，这里用第三人称单数形式turns。
7．命题立意：考查连接词辨析。
解析：However→Therefore/Thus However“然而”表示转折，根据语意应该“因此”或者“这样”，因此改为Therefore/Thus。
8．命题立意：考查名词辨析。
解析：librarians→librarian 根据语意这里的名词指的是Morgan le Fay一个人，所以应该用单数librarian。
9．命题立意：考查动词形式辨析。
解析：go→going end up doing以??结束。 10．命题立意：考查及物动词用法。
解析：去掉to attract是及物动词，因此to删除掉。
Passage 3
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(2015·甘肃省二诊)
Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial production and punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.
答案：
Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China.
becomePeople ∧ forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this
arebreathingproblem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more
astrict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial production and
lawspunish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop
that/whichenvironmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving
ofandenergy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become
ourmore.
more或改为much better
文章大意：雾霾天气越来越多，我们应采取措施，行动起来。 1．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：became→ become become的过去分词形式是原形。 2．命题立意：考查被动语态。
解析：forced前加are people是force的动作承受者，故forced前加are。 3．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：breathe→breathing avoid避免，后跟v-ing形式作宾语，故breathe → breathing。
4．命题立意：考查冠词。
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