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Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.

First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it’s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Don’t read books or use a cell phone in bed. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy. 【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如more and more，National Eye Care Day，every year，as we all know，try our best，be good for，such as，do more eye exercises，be helpful to，look far away，from time to time，make sure，have a good eye habit，in bed，in a word等。而First,/ Second,/ Finally,等语句的运用，不仅使习作思路清晰，层次分明；而且丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

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