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in need.
5. With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need.
6. If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） as；in addition；also；and；if等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句型，如：My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city.使用了同位语；Knowing that the sports meeting will be held in our city, I can’t wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.使用了现在分词作状语；I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need.使用了and连接的并列句；With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need使用了with伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句；If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.使用了if引导的条件状语从句等；还使用了一些固定短语：can’t wait to，apply to，be good at，communicate with，be eager to，lend a hand，in need，heart and soul，look forward to，hear from等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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