2016最新高一短文改错系列（一）

2016年最新高一英语短文改错练习集锦系列（一）

请你修改下列作文 文中共有10出语言错误，一般每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或者修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意： 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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Time spent in a bookstore can be most pleasant, if you are a book lover or merely to buy a book as a present. You may even have entered the shop just to find a shelter from a sudden shower. However the reason, you can soon become totally unaware of your surrounding. You soon focus a certain book, and usually it is only much later when you realize you have spent too much time there and must hurry off to keep some forgotten appointment. This opportunity to escape the realities of everyday life is the mainly attraction of a bookstore. A music shop was very much like a bookshop. If it is a good shop, no assistant will approach you with greeting. You needn’t buy something you don’t want . In a bookstore an assistant should remain in the background until you have finished reading . Then, and only then, is his services necessary.

(内蒙古呼和浩特市高一上学期期末模拟) 2

Last night it snowed heavy. When Susan and I got up this morning, we found the whole garden was covered with thick snow. So we decided clear the path. We got two spades but began our work at once. We both worked so hard that the path was clear soon. See this , our father felt very surprising. He smiled happily at us , telling us that we have done a good job and that he was proud for us . Finally my father gave us some pocket money as a reward for the Spring Festival. Susan and I was happy because we both had got the money through labors.

(呼和浩特市第二中学高一上学期期末模拟) 3

Last Sunday morning , when I was having a walk in the park near my home , I came across a crew made a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I could hard believe my luck---not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

(辽宁省实验中学高一下学期期初考试)

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Dear Mr Liu,

I am Li Gang and was admit to Tsinghua University. My family was poor that there was not enough money for me to continue my study. But you offered the needed money to help me enter into Tsinghua. Because I really want to say thank to you.

Mr Liu, you not only help me out of trouble , but also taught me how to be a perfect man. You have set a excellent example to me. I will study hardly and do what I can to help those that are in need.

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In the end , I promise not to let you up, and really thank you again for your help. Yours sincerely, Li Gang

( 贵阳市普通中学高一上学期期末考试）

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My hometown , that stands beside a wider river, is a beautiful place. There are about fifty thousands people in it. The streets are wide and straight, and there are many new houses and shops along it . But at one time my hometown was very poor. Life was good for a few rich family. Most of the people have not enough food to eat and houses to live. Everything has changed now. They have put up factories , theaters ,schools or flats. They have also built a modern hospital and a large hall that can seat two thousand people . On the river, boats busy come and go day and night. They carry the products to all the parts of the world.

(辽宁营口市高一上学期期末考试) 6

I should be very pleasant if you could come to my home and stay with us for a few days on the summer holidays. My native village is much beautiful. I can imagine the time when we are going to spend together. Every morning we shall take a walk in the neighboring hills, where we can enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs singing by the birds . In the afternoon , we shall go for swim in the river. At night we shall sit in the yard, observed the star in the sky. Please let me to know what you think about the plan, but I do look forward to your coming to my home.

(甘肃兰州一中上学期期末考试)

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Music and songs play a important part in our daily life. For example, they can bring we pleasure and make up happy. However , they can help us improve our study efficiency. I was fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved and cared by Grandma . What’s more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten.

(河北石家庄市高一上学期期末考试)

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My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy . He didn’t want share things with other people . For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. A game of tennis making him very busy！ He didn’t care if something he did made people angrily. For instance, on a cold night he played strongly and loud music till 4 o’clock in the morning. But he is different now. He often helps Grandma with houseworks , Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

( 江西南昌市三校联考高一下学期1月考试) 9

The day before yesterday , I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday , so there was many people . Under the help of the shop assistant, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave when I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous , but I tried to think of a way to help him. Suddenly a good idea came me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes . As I expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who

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quick walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.

(黑龙江哈六中学高一上学期期末考试) 10

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot , but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them , big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loudly sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.

（大连市二十中高一上学期期末考试)

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Answers : 第一篇

1第一句：if 改为whether 2 第二句：去掉第一个a 3 第三句：However 改为 Whatever 4第三句： surrounding 改为surroundings

5 第四句 ： focus 后加on 6 第四句： when改为that 7 第五句：mainly 改为main 8 第六句 was 改为 is 9 第八句：something 改为anything 10 第 十句：is 改为are. 第二篇

1 第一句：heavy 改为heavily. 2 第二句：去掉it 3 第三句：clear 前加to 4 第四句：but 改为and 5 第六句： See改为Seeing 6 第六句：surprising 改为surprised 7 第七句：have 改为had 8 第七句：for 改为of 9 第九句：was改为were 10 第九句：labors改为labor. 第三篇

1 第一句：made改为making 2 第一句：actor改为actors 3 第二句：but改为 so 4 第二句: get 后加it 5 第三句：have改为had 6 第三句：everywhere改为anywhere 7 第四句：disappointing改为disappointed

8 第五句：去掉the 9 第六句：hard改为hardly 10 第六句：had改为have. 第四篇 1 第一句：admit改为admitted 2 第二句： poor前加so 3 第三句：去掉into 4 第四句：Because改为So 5 第四句：thank改为thanks 6 第五句：help改为helped 7 第六句：a 改为an 8 第七句：hardly改为hard 9 第七句：that改为who 10 第八句：up改为down 第五篇

1 第一句：that改为which 2 第一句：wider改为wide 3 第二句：thousands改为thousand 4 第三句：it改为them 5 第五句：family改为families 6 第六句： have改为had 7 第六句：live后加in 8 第八句：or改为and 9 第十句：busy改为busily 10 第十一句：去掉第二个the 第六篇

1 第一句：pleasant改为pleased 2 第一句：on改为in 3 第二句：much改为very 4 第三句：去掉when或when改为which/that 5 第四句：singing改为sung 6 第五句：swim前加a 7 第六句：observed改为observing

8 第六句：star改为stars 9 第七句：去掉第一个to 10 第七句：but改为and 第七篇

1 第一句：a改为an 2 第二句：we改为us 3 第三句：However改为Besides/Moreover 4 第四句：was改为am 5 第四句：but改为and 6 第五句：that改为which 7 第五句：cared 后加for

8 第六句：去掉was或者was前加which/that 9 第六句：fellow改为fellows 10 第七句：enjoying改为enjoyed 第八篇

1 第二句：want后加to 2 第三句：them改为it 3 第三句：去掉where或者where改为which/that 4 第四句：eats改为ate 5 第五句：other改为others 6 第六句：is改为was 7 第七句：making改为made 8 第八句：angrily改为angry 9 第九句：strongly改为strong 10 第十一句：houseworks 改housework

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第九篇

1 第一句：where改为which/that 2 第二句：第二个was改为were 3 第三句：Under改为With 4 第五句：去掉but或but改为yet 5 第六句：came后加to 6 第七句：purposes改为purpose 7 第八句:give 改为gave 8 第八句：quick改为quickly 9 第九句：hear改为hearing 10 第九句：him改为me 第十篇

1 第一句：a改为the 2 第二句：sudden改为suddenly 3 第四句：but改为and 4 第六句：out后加of 5 第七句：drop改为drops 6 第八句：come改为came 7 第八句：去掉more 8 第九句：loudly改为loud

9 第十句：that改为what 10 第十句：broke改为broken

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