短文改错（二）
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线( \\ )划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.
2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy. However, things are quite opposite to their expectations. Not only I get bored with hours of practice but also I doubted about the valuable of it. Nevertheless, when I entered high school, write calligraphy proved both essential or beneficial. It was at that time when I realized how important it is to master a certain skill.
Judging from my own experience, I want to say a few word to those children who have a same trouble as I did. Do not refuse to learn a skill when young, as at the long run you will find them helpful.
3、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\\),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
As a saying go, “Pressure is another form of motive power”. However, many people can’t deal with pressure in an appropriate way so that they become more anxiously. Seriously, it may cause many terrible personal problem. But how can you deal with pressure? To, begin with, anybody has pressure, but you should accept the pressure. If you are in deep pressure, you can distract your attention by doing some interested things like running, crafting or listening to music. Secondly, you should talk to family members and friends to reducing the stress, maybe they can give you some practical advice. Thirdly, you are need to learn how to self-adjust, that is the most effective way to help yourself. In word, pressure is an inevitable part of your life. You are supposed to make the most of it to promote ourselves.
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I
think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, boys and girls. Today I am going to talk with what you should do when a car accident occur. If you sense that your car has run into another vehicle, don't panic and trying to remain quiet and calm. You are supposed to stop your car where it is and get out of it immediately to see how serious the damage it is. Call 120 for help if anyone is bad injured. Call the traffic police station or the insurance company to report the accident. After that, stay at a very spot and wait for their arrival. If the accident is nothing serious, both you and the other driver can handle it by
yourself. You can simply drive away after you have scanned each other's ID card, put down each other’s phone number, and agree on how much should be paid and the way it is to be paid. Avoid any more harm to the other side if it is you who to blame.
7、假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写。
Three years ago, I was addicted to computer games. I played with games day and night on weekends. I lost interesting in my studies and I was often absent from school.
My parents got very worrying about me. They persuaded me to quit play games, but I wouldn’t give up my bad habit. Later my English teacher gave me some advices on how to quit the bad Habit. Listed the disadvantages of playing computer games on a piece of paper, I put them on my bed and tried to remember them. Beside the list were my effective schedule. I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid playing games. After that I became active in studying and turn out to be one of the top students in our school.
8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Henry, with who I studied in the same class, didn’t like studying at school. That’s because he couldn’t go to high school. He had to return back to his hometown, where his father wished him to learn to manage our small
shop. However, the young man was not interesting in it and didn’t do as his father said. He spends a lot of time reading and he also learned how to repair cars. Last month, I received an e-mail from him inviting me take my vacation on his hometown. I started off. Seeing that he was such successful, I said, “Henry, all road lead to Rome. You are great!”
答案以及解析
1答案及解析： 答案：
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2、regarded→regard 考查动词的时态。根据第一句话提到Nowadays可知用一般现在时。 3、has→is 考查固定句型。There be 表示\有\。
4、so去掉考查连词。在英语中有因为没有所以,故去掉。
5、This→It 考查代词。It is convenient to do 做某事很方便。It做形式主语。
6、Moreover→However 考查副词。句意:然而一些学生认为网上有些不好的信息。与第二行提到Some students regarded it as a great helper表示对比,故用however.
7、spend→spending 考查动名词做主语。句意:玩游戏花费过多的时间不仅仅影响学习还有害健康; 8、for→to 考查固定短语。Do harm to 对......有害;
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