高三12年二模作文-教师版

高三12年二模作文-教师版

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长宁区：

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instrutions given below in Chinese.

假如你在网上订了一款MP3作为生日礼物送给好朋友，但收到的MP3却存在质量问题。请你给销售经理写一封投诉信。内容包括：

1.MP3有质量问题； 2.给你造成的损失； 3.你的合理要求。

(注：信的开头和结尾已写好)

参考范文： Dear manager,

I’m writing to tell you about the MP3 Last week I bought from your company on the Internet, which was intended for my good friend as a birthday gift. this morning I’m extremely glad that the MP3 ordered on line has arrived, but when I opened it ,I was surprised to find the wrapping paper has been broken ,the package containing the MP3 appeared to be in good condition. However, I find it hard to be opened no matter how many measures I had taken. what your department sent to me took me 2 hours to unpack it finally. needless to say. sweet music can be heard as enjoyed.

With reference to my order NO.1314, there is no doubt that the MP3 you delivered really comes from your company, whose poor quality really made me very disappointed, and it is the poor MP3 that made me suffering a great loss from it, To some extent, which has had a bad effect on me, for I can’t send it in this poor condition to my friend. The broken MP3 not only brought me great economic loss but also lessen my trust as a consumer.

As is mentioned above, I firmly believe that it can contribute to a bad fame to your company. Considering it, would you please let me know whether a new MP3 can be redelivered as soon as possible or not? Would you take my case into deep consideration rather than turn a blind eye to my requirement? All in all, I would appreciate it if much attention should be paid to my requirement and I hope your company can be responsible for what you produced.

An early response will be appreciated with your convenience!

Yours sincerely, X X

评析：从2011年上海高考卷采用了应用文-申请信这一命题格式来看，及纵观近十年来全国各地的高考卷来看，应用文在全国高考卷中被命题专家高度青睐并采用。应用文这一题材不应该为我们2012年即将参加高考的学生所忽视。本次2012长宁二模考试继续采用了应用文-投诉信来作为写作题材，这值得引起我们广大师生对这一文体的高度重视。一般来说，应用文非常讲究格式。当然，条理清楚的叙述和高级语法及高级句型的使用，上下行文间融洽的连词关联词的选用，丰富的词汇等仍旧是应用文考察的重点。

附:英语投诉信简要模板：

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I am writing to you about ［sth.＋定于从句＋状语。表示你要投诉的东西以及部分详细情况。］When I brought it home, I found that it didn't work.［是某东西不能使用，这句话可以用。］Since the matter has brought a lot of trouble to my family, as you may understand, I'm extremely upset.［表达这样东西或事情，给生活和家庭带来的影响也可以用。］

Therefore, I would like ［both／either／all 等等.这里是提出解决方案，您可以说几种，也可以指定一种。］. Please ［do sth. 这里是针对解决方案提出的要求。］ as soon as possible Yours sincerely XXX 2.

崇明区：

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

近年来，食品安全事件频频曝光，食品安全问题成为人们关注的焦点。最近，某网站的一个论坛正在就这个问题展开讨论，请你也来参与这个讨论，谈谈你对这一问题的看法。

你的讨论需包括： ? 食品安全问题的现状 ? 产生这一问题的原因 ? 解决这一问题的建议 3. 奉贤区：

Ⅱ.Guided writing（25分）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words. The composition must be based on the information given below.

1．描述漫画内容；

2．结合自己或身边的事例阐述图中的寓意； 请根据下面的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：

3．简要发表自己的观点。 4.

虹口区：

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

下图为上海市城市污染源比例柱状图。请你简要描述图表内容，并就城市空气污染的状况提出你的改

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进建议。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级、学校等真实信息。

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【写作参考答案】

With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious. In Shanghai，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.

Air pollution is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases. 35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to others’ health as well as to that of the smokers. Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.

We should take some measures to fight against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas. We can plant more trees，grass and flowers. All in all, if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved. 5.

黄浦区：

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你所在的社区正在征集以下三个志愿者服务项目的具体活动方案：1）参与社区环保；2）陪伴空巢老人（the elderly in empty nest）；3）组织读书活动。请你为其中的一个项目出谋划策。（文中请不要出现真实的社区名称、校名和人名。）

你的文章需包括以下内容：

? 介绍为该项目设计的2个具体活动； ? 简单陈述活动的意义。 6.

宝山，静安，杨浦，青浦区：

Ⅴ. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

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90．简要描述当前在上海停车十分困难的现状（小区或商场等），并提出你的解决方案或合理建议。 7.

闵行区：

V. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假定你是校英语俱乐部的负责人，需要在英文校报上发表一篇文章，向新生介绍英语俱乐部。文章需包含以下三个方面内容：

1. 英语俱乐部的宗旨 2. 英语俱乐部的主要活动内容 3. 参加英语俱乐部的益处

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浦东新区：

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

外国中学生Amy第一次来上海，由你陪同她参观。请你挑选一个具体的地方，将此次陪同的设想写成短文。短文应包含以下信息：

1．描述你打算带她去的那个地方。 2．阐述你挑选那个地方的理由。 ● 参考词语：

Oriental TV Tower; the Bund;

Shanghai Museum; Yu Garden;

a … market/fair;

a … community/school/home … … 9.

普陀区：

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

学校的艺术节

作文提示

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