第十处:and→but 考查连词。句意:对于Molly来说,它们不是垃圾而是珍宝。not...but...不是……而是……,
前后词之间是转折关系,故用but。 Ⅴ. 书面表达 Dear Tom,
Last weeks, we had a heated discussion about “friends” and “friendship”. I’m writing to share our ideas with you.
We all agree that we can hardly do without friends in life. There are many difficulties we can’t overcome with our own efforts. Besides, we need friends to share our joys and sorrow, otherwise we would feel lonely. A good friend is someone who respects us and who we respect. True friends are those who never desert us even when we are in trouble. Instead, they offer us sincere and selfless help even at the cost of their own interests.
In my opinion, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other, which can stand the test of time. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【名师点睛】
本文是一篇提纲类作文。文章出了详细的提示。考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全:1. I’m writing to share …2. We all agree that we can hardly do without friends…3. A good friend is someone who …4. In my opinion…:注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇had a heated discussion,sincere and selfless,at the cost of,is largely based on和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。 【范文亮点】
①A good friend is someone who respects us and who we respect.定语从句。 ②true friendship is largely based on supporting each other, which can stand the test of time.非限制性定语从句。
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