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2009年上海高考作文及范例
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：1、你感兴趣的课程2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么3、为什么想学这些内容 模板：
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Dear ..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising… .../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference. I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience. Best regards for your health and success. Sincerely yours, X X X
范文
It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.
During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.
The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative. Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.
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2010 上海高考英语作文 下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：
●描述图片里学生上课的场景 ●比较你同时期的上课情况 ●简单谈谈你的感受
范文：
Wearing excited and eager expressions, the children in the picture raise their hands as high as they can for the opportunity to answer the question put forward by the teacher. Apparently, all of them, whether boys or girls, sociable or shy are totally fascinated and inspired, and are always full of ingenious(新颖的)ideas.
On seeing the picture, I can’t help recalling my first day in the elementary school. To the best of my recollection（就我记忆所及，如果我没记错的话）, we pupils at that time all felt exceedingly motivated to answer the questions asked by our teacher. More often than not（通常）, we raised our little hands almost at the same moment as our teacher put forward a question, all desperate to grab the chance to answer questions holding appeal to us. Judging from the excitement on our faces, the teachers all deduced /triggered our authentic yearning for knowledge in various respects(方面) and our substantial (大量的)curiosity. Moreover, savoring (品尝)the pleasure of acquiring knowledge with obvious relish (滋味,风味), we found that the pleasure of gaining knowledge far outweighed(远远大于;比...重要)the embarrassment of the failure to answer the question correctly.
Quite honestly, I interpret my unvarying(不变的)curiosity and yearnings to have played an indispensable role in my ongoing (不间断的)study in the following twelve years. Had I not been blessed with such enormous yearning for knowledge. I couldn’t have been so motivated to delve into(钻研) the realm (领域)of science, literature and culture and let my potentials be exploited to full.
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2011上海高考英语作文： 若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。 启示 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。 信中请包括： 1． 你个人基本情况 2． 你对申请项目具体设想 3． 项目经费使用计划 联系方式：2011hope@icf.org 2011年6月7日 范文： Dear…,
I’m writing this e-mail to apply for the project aimed at helping children in poor areas. My name is Li Ming, a student from Ming Qi middle school. Last year, I was granted an opportunity to visit a school in the depth of a mountain and the experience kept flashing over and over, which had triggered the intention to shoulder the responsibility of helping them overcome the hardships and struggle they would go through.
There is a series of steps in my project that will be demonstrated as follows:Of the top priority is our organizing an activity to introduce the living and learning conditions of kids in poor areas and thus to bring home to the public the urgency of immediate action to be taken to help them out. Whether by donating money or by sending daily necessities from clothes to books, everyone should do his bit.Besides, a video play will be shot to convey the wishes, cheers and encouragement from us city people to them. Equally significantly, I along with my teammates have planned to visit those kids, to play and chat with them, which is bound to establish a solid connection between us. If I were lucky enough to be granted the 2000 yuan fund, a quarter of it would be spared for the traffic and other costs, while the rest would be added to the money collected to be donated contributing to modernizing and improving the teaching devices.
Thanks for taking time to read my e-mail and I’m looking forward to being part of your project. Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
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2012上海高考英语作文： 上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述； ● 你从中获得的启发。
范文：
My Diary Monday, May 28th Today, I paid a visit to a primary school where a girl named Amy studies to observe 2 art lessons. In the first class, the teacher presented everyone with a large piece of paper and required them to paint whatever they liked on it. So excited was Amy that she applied the colors to her feet, using them as paint brushes.On the contrary, in the other class, the teacher just instructed them to copy the model painting. Despite the fact that Amy also painted her pictures earnestly, I discovered that she wasn’t involved in the painting as passionately.I maintain it was the creativity and imagination that made the striking difference between the 2 classes. Firstly, what impressed me most was Amy’s sweet smile in the first class. It goes without saying thatthe happiness from one’s creation and imagination will allow him to receive the real sense of achievement and satisfaction from his work. Only when we feel pleased with our works can we create something brilliant. Simultaneously(同时地), equipped with innovation spirit, we will be more likely todevelop our potential abilities. Given that every one of us say the same words or do the same things, our country will be destined to become less dynamic and prosperous. However, it is a fair bet thatmore amazing contributions will be achieved with our initiative. As what has been discussed above, I firmly hold the belief thatcreativity and imagination are two invaluable qualitieswhich success feeds on. Therefore, I will go to any length to cultivate my creativity and imagination to make greater contributions to my country. 文档鉴赏
2013上海高考英语作文： 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比） Dear Sir or Madam,
I’ve read about your poster about selecting the location of an exhibition of famous paintings, and I think that the museum is a nice place.
First of all, compared with those libraries, the museum is an excellent place which inspires our eagerness for knowledge. It is certain that visitors will be more absorbed in the fantastic surroundings. By contrast, I don’t think those normal libraries in communities match well with the paintings with great fame and high prices.
While some of my friends insist that libraries are more convenient, I maintain that since the transportation system in Shanghai is very advanced and the museum is located in the city center, it’s not a bit difficult for us to reach the show. All in all, I am firmly convinced that the museum is a better place for this grand painting exhibition, and it’ll be a great honor if I could study those wonderful paintings in the best museum in Shanghai. I hope you will accept my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
Wang Min
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