生命中，不断地有人离开或进入。于是，看见的，看不见的；记住的，遗忘了。生命中，不断地有得到和失落。于是，看不见的，看见了；遗忘的，记住了。然而，看不见的，是不是就等于不存在？记住的，是不是永远不会消失？
新东方大学英语四级强化班——书面表达
四级作文评分方法
? 五级评分制：2、5、8、11、14分 ? 注意字数适中
? 用不同单词表达不同意思
如何打动评卷人 ? 文章的整体脉络清晰 ? 段落的衔接畅顺 ? 用词造句经典 ? 书写美观
英文写作的基本常识 ? 清晰的结构
1) 观点鲜明的开头 2) 紧扣主题的结尾
3) 由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落 ? 统一的中心
? 自然的衔接：逻辑关系显性化
1) 重复词：概括；直接；齐头 2) 序数词
3) 关联词：递进；转折；因果
平时如何提高写作
? 阅读四级阅读理解文章等等 ? 背诵18篇优秀四级作文
? 看电影——阿甘正传、狮子王、老友记30遍
图表类
? 特点：有图——趋势透，字数少 ? 段落安排：
第一段：趋势（变化） 第二段：分析变化的原因 第三段：自己的看法和感想 ? 正文：
? 第一段：
1. 如图所示
a) b) c) d)
As we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram, …… The…display that standing the ……carefully, we can see. The chart/graph shows/displays that…… As can be shown in the table ……,
e) It is clear/apparent from the chart/table that 2. 比例
a) B has the largest percentage/proportion of……. b) ……account(s) for/take(s) up 10%.
c) On the top of the list is ……, which accounts for 60%. d) At the bottom is ……,which accounts for 10%.
e) A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%. 3. 增长与下降
a) The number of ……increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically（戏剧地）
/substantially（实质的）/considerably/sharply/steeply（险峻地） from 1990 to 2000. b) There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/ rise in the number of …… from 1990 to 2000.
c) The number of ……increased/rose steadily（稳定地）/gradually（逐渐地）/slowly/slightly from 1990 to 2000.
d) There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/ rise in the number of …… from 1990 to 2000.
e) 下降：decrease/fall/drop；a decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of …… 4. 达到某点
a) The situation/figures reached /hit a peak/high at 60% in …….
The situation/figures peaked at 60% in …….
b) The situation/figures bottomed out at 20% in …….
The situation/figures hit a trough at 20% in ……. 5. 倍数
a) A is twice/three/four times what it was in 1990.
A is twice/three/four times the amount in 1990.
A is twice/three/four times as much/many as ……in 1990.
b) The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between 1990 and 2000.
?increased??roseIn 2002, it??jumped?shot up????from 5 to 10 percent of the total????to 15 percent??by 15 percent??????. ??
c)
d)
?decreased?By comparison with 1990, it ?dropped?fell???from 10 to 5 percent????to 15 percent??by 15 percent?????. ??
e)
?figure??percentageThe ??number?population?????has????nearby??almost?more than????doubled????tripled??compared with????as compared with???as against???that of last year.??
?dropped?It has?increased?decreased???almost????more than??about????two and a half times????twice??six times?????,compared with??.??f)
?numberThe??percentage?reached?It has?approached?risen to??twice???is?4 times???half???as much as that of 1990. ????the recent 5 years???in?the past few years??1990?????.??g)
h)
??something of a plateau????50 percentage??an average of 50 percentage??
? 第二段：As … the number of … 动词+副词 during …
As … early as 数字，the number was ……, then …… it because
??Several factors?contributeto???Whatresultin??……列举
?Such changes??cause?beresponsiblefor??clead1. First……, second……, last（in addition）
2. For one thing, ……, for another thing , ……, what’s more……On one
hand , ……, on the other hand , more over, …… Therefore all these reasons……the changes.
?好：发扬? 第三段：总结：Hence from the ……?
坏：终止? 喊口号：①It is high time that +一般过去时
②Only through ……can we……只有……我们才能……
Asthesayinggoesremarkthefollowingsayingin???mind?? ③OneWegreatshouldpersonbear +名人名言
? 操辞：
? 上升：rise , increase , go up , boon , rocket
? 下降：decrease , reduce , come down , on the decline ? 快速：rapidly , dramatically , sharply（锐） ? 慢：slowly , gradually
二选一类
? 特点：给出两个观点
? 段落安排：
第一段：
1) 引出将要评论的事物或者观点；
2) 提出第一种观点； 3)
本观点支持性分论点。
第二段：
1) 承上启下； 2) 提出第二种观点； 3)
本观点支持性分论点。
第三段：我的观点 ? 正文：
第一段： 1) 引言：
i.
In recent years, with fast economic growth, ……have appeared in many families in China.
?People's attitude towards the ...... varies widely.??People are divided on the question as to whether ...... .??Different people will have/offer different views/perspectives/answers on??. 近年来，伴随着经济的快速发展，……在中国很多的家庭中出现了。人们对……有着不同的观点。 ii.
With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a …….Yet,?people's opinions of ?? vary from person to person.????varies greatly/widely?public attitude toward it ??is quite of the contrary.????differs sharply. 伴随着人们生活水平的提高，一些中国家庭开始能够买……。但是，人们对……的观点是不同的。
?growing tendency to/in/that??越来越大的趋势??general/deep-seated belief in/that??普遍的信条?Nowadays??growing/nation-wide recognition of/thatiii.
??Currently?is a ???普遍的信条?there ??growing/general awareness of/that??越来越多的关注??Recently????growing/great demand/enthusiasm for sth. among sb.? sb.对sth.有越来越/巨大的需求/热情???deep/keen interest in??非常有兴趣
???????????
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