这一块的固定句式非常多。注意单词拼写和表达的完整性。
2.可适当拓宽讨论的范围，引出多方观点，并着重论述自己的观点。注意要紧扣主题，思路清晰，逻辑连贯。
3.总结全文。可适当进行呼吁，呼吁政府或其他社会机构以及个人的正确做法。这一点
也是同学所擅长的，因为许多类似的现象我们都写过类似的总结。 评分标准：
1. 18分以上：内容切题，字数达标；包括提纲的全部要点；单词拼写和语法使用正确；2. 13—18分：内容切题，字数达标；包括提纲的全部要点；语法表达基本符合规范。
基本达到前后语言表达的逻辑性，句式通顺。
3. 8—12分：内容切题，文章长度基本符合要求；基本包括提纲的要点；语句可以理解，
但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。
4. 0—7分：文不切题，字数不达标；语句混乱，无法理解。
【参考例文】
There is a growing tendency that an increasing number of people are choosing to travel by car instead of walking, which exerts great negative impacts on our society.People’s views vary with individuals. Some people maintain they are still in favor of cars as a
means of transportation because of its convenience others, however, hold an opposite opinion,
arguing its convenience is at the cost of environment. As for me, I am inclined to the second view.
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It should be noted that cars provide not only convenience in people’s daily life but also a brand
new way of life as people are more likely to avoid walking, given the comfort of cars. On the contrary, they tend to become inactive physically which may in turn lead to laziness in mind.In
addition, most importantly, this new way of life increases a large amount of carbon emission in the
atmosphere, for which nature will eventually take revenge on human beings.relative laws and regulations on the production and consumption of car industry as well as people’s behavior to put the situation under control. In short, stopping using cars unreasonably is
undoubtedly a good choice everyone should make in the future.__
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