过渡词使用较好：As a result； By the way；what's worse， 【解答】Dear Mrs．Green，
I'm glad to hear from you．I'm writing to tell you something about my life and study in recent days．（高分句型一）I'm very busy with my lessons now，for the Entrance Examination，which is very important to me，is near，．Every day，I have to spend most of my time in studying．As a result，I don't have enough time to take exercise，what's worse，I don't communicate a lot with my parents and my friends．（介绍自己的学习和生活）
By the way，（高分句型二）I am now a volunteer for the the 13th National Games，which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin．（高分句型三）In order to be a qualified volunteer，I have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it．
Will you please pay a visit to Tianjin again so that we may meet again，for I miss you very much!
Looking forward to seeing you a second time．（表达欢迎来重庆的希望）
Yours，
Li Jin．
【点评】该书面表达的时态使用得当，概括文章所要求的全部要点，而且能够有效地使用语句之间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的．
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参与本试卷答题和审题的老师有：宿迁宿豫；做个好人；寒风；潜伏（排名不分先后） 菁优网
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