本篇应用文写作是一封电子邮件。内容要点:1.告诉Jeff你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名;2.感谢他在口语技巧上给予的帮助。考生可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。内容比较简单,注意表达要顺畅,尽量使用一些高级结构,给文章添彩,比如:宾语从句、介词短语、现在分词、不定式短语等。
推荐用语:take the first place,thank you so much for,advice on how to do,with your great help等。 【参考范文】 Dear Jeff,
I can’t wait to tell you that I took the first place in the Speech Contest.I know that without your help,I could have gone nowhere.Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive.With your great help,I faced the challenge confidently.I really appreciate what you’ve done for me.Thank you very much!
Yours, Li Hua
Writing 5
假定你是李华,从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor)的广告,欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括中英文能力); 2.参加意图(帮助别人学习中文和介绍中国文化); 3.希望获准。 注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作属于提纲类作文,其文体优势在于要点明确,内容贴近生活,这样能保证绝大多数考生有话可说。不过此类文章的写作难点在于考生要注意理顺要点,适当增加细节,使用恰当的过渡词句,以使文章语句逻辑连贯、条理清楚;同时还要注意仔细斟酌,认真选词,尽量使用一些较高级的短语、固定句式来确切地表达意思,避免汉语式的表达。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua,a senior middle school student from the People’s Republic of China.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet,employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.I am interested in it and I’d like to take part in it.
Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it.Besides,I have a good command of spoken and written English.I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese and introduce Chinese culture to them as well.
I hope I will be accepted and I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 6
假如你是李华,有一个好朋友叫王刚,进入高三后,他的学习压力越来越大,常常熬夜,而白天却打不起精神听课,学习成绩每况愈下,为此他很痛苦,写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他,提出一些自我调整的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Wang Gang,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达是一篇书信体应用文。话题熟悉,贴近考生生活,容易下笔。书信的格
式已经给出,无需考虑。首先,在构思过程中,要仔细审题,明确立意和要求。其次,在写作过程中,要对所给信息进行分析,做到层次清晰,逻辑性强,有针对性和说服力。切忌大而空,摆花架子。时态要以现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主,第一人称穿插使用。最后,在语言上,要使用亮彩的语言和经典句型来提升文章档次。当然,通过使用一些恰当的过渡性副词或连词能够使行文连贯,给人印象深刻。 【参考范文】 Dear Wang Gang,
How are you getting along with your study recently?Here are some advice,hoping they are helpful for you.
Firstly,you should follow your teacher’s advice,as it’s the first time for us to go through the College Entrance Examination while our teachers have so much experience.Secondly,you are advised to have a good sleep because a lack of sleep may make you have a hard time catching up in your studies.Thirdly,it’s necessary for you to make full use of daytime.In a word,relax yourself and believe in yourself,I do believe you can be successful!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 7
假如你是星光中学的学生李华,将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.介绍自己的梦想:成为一名山村教师,帮助山村孩子; 2.解释拥有这个梦想的原因:山区偏僻,教育落后; 3.遇到的阻碍:父母和朋友都反对; 4.我会……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Good morning,everyone!
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Thank you! 【写作指导】
本文是一篇提纲类应用作文,内容是要求考生以“My Chinese Dream”为主题写一篇演讲稿。写作内容主要包括:一是介绍自己的中国梦;二是解释拥有这个梦想的原因;三是要实现这个梦想的障碍;四是表明自己的愿望和决心。本文的话题符合时代需求,具有一定的现实意义。考生在审题时主要应考虑以下几个方面:动词的时态和语态、主谓一致和写作要点。这篇文章应以一般现在时和第一人称为主。在写作过程中,考生思路要清晰,语句通顺,可适当增添细节以使文章更流畅,可以运用一些复杂句型,如定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句等,还可以运用一些高级词汇和非谓语动词结构,这样有助于提高文章的得分档次。 【参考范文】
Good morning,everyone!
I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “My Chinese Dream”.
As we know,the education of rural areas falls behind other areas.And the children there are longing for knowledge.Therefore,the problem of lacking teachers is especially serious.However,my parents and friends object to my idea of being a rural teacher.They think I’m foolish.I understand their thoughts and feelings,but I think rural children need me greatly.I will study hard to realize my dream.
I won’t regret my choice.I will struggle for my dream.Come on and join me! Thank you!
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