完全达到了预期的写作目的。 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 ·覆盖了所有内容要点； 第二档 （15分－17分） ·运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求； ·语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致； ·使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。 达到了预期的写作目的。 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 第三档 （12分－14分） ·覆盖了内容要点； ·运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求； ·语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 ·漏掉或未描述清楚内容要点； ·所用句式和词汇有限； ·语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。 第四档 （6分－11分） 未能清楚地传达信息。 第五档 （1分－5分） 未完成试题规定的任务。 ·明显遗漏主要内容； ·句式单调、词汇贫乏； ·语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。 未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。 0分 三、内容要点：
1. 乘车前往长城 2. 游览长城 3. 参观博物馆 4. 合影留念
四、One possible version: Our Trip to the Great Wall
Last weekend, I accompanied two exchange students to the Great Wall, which proved to be a very pleasant trip.
Early on Saturday morning, we got on the bus happily. Everyone was excited, discussing what we had known about the Great Wall, including anecdotes and legends. Two hours later we got to our destination, and
everyone couldn’t wait to start climbing. We spent the next few hours on the Great Wall, stopping from time to time to take photos and appreciate its magnificence as well as the breathtaking scenery around it. Then we went to the Great Wall Museum nearby. It contains exhibitions showing the history of the Great Wall and the social landscape along it, from which we got a better understanding of the Great Wall. Time passed quickly! It was noon before we knew it. Before leaving, we took a group selfie to record this unforgettable moment. Excitement was written on everyone’s face.
It was really an impressive trip and I really felt proud of this world wonder.
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