【点睛】1.so + 形容词/副词 + that + 从句,如：This story is so interesting that I want to read it again.（这个故事如此有趣以至我想再读一次。）
2.so+形容词/副词+(a/an)+(单数)复数可数名词／+that+从句,如果句中的名词是单数可数名词,其前就要用
a或an,如果是复数可数名词或者,前面就不用，如： Those are so beautiful flowers that wants to pick them.（那些花是如此漂亮以至那个女孩想要摘下它们。）
3.such+a/an+形容词+单数可数名词+that+从句,如：It is such an interesting story that I want to read it again.（这是一个如此有趣的故事以至我想再读一次。） 温馨提示：so+表示数量的词many/much/few/little(少)+名词，此时不能用such。 本题第4小题，句意：看到如此非凡的美，我觉得我身体里的每一个细胞都唤醒了。so修饰形容词或副词，such修饰修饰名词。此处beauty是名词，故把so改成such。
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
52.假如你是某中学高二学生。3月5日是学雷锋日，你们班组织了一次志愿者活动。请根据下面四幅图所提供的活动内容和过程写一篇英文短文，为你校校刊英语专栏投稿。
注意：词数100左右。
提示词汇：in memory of；voluntary； a heated discussion； nursing home；cleaning； daily English expression；
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performance； learned from；realize
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【答案】Our class planned to organize a voluntary activity on March 5th in memory of Lei Feng. After a heated discussion, we decided to get to a nursing home to do something for the elderly.
On March 5th, we set out early in the morning. Upon our arrival, we first did a thorough cleaning. Some swept and mopped the floor while the others cleaned the windows and some washing. In addition, we gave wonderful performances for the elderly and taught them some daily English expressions. All the elderly had a good time with us.
We’ve really learned a lot from the experience. We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those in need. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇看图作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇看图作文：假如你是某中学高二学生。3月5日是学雷锋日，你们班组织了一次志愿者活动。请根据下面四幅图所提供的活动内容和过程写一篇英文短文，为你校校刊英语专栏投稿。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：planned to organize a voluntary activity（计划组织一个志愿活动）；After a heated discussion（一个激烈的讨论之后）；set out early
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in the morning（大清早出发）；some daily English expressions（一些日常的英语短语）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。Some swept and mopped the floor while the others cleaned the windows and some washing.句中while是并列连词，是并列句；We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those in need.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；另外，Upon our arrival, In addition, in need等的运用为文章增色添彩。
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