书面表达
2019
七、书面表达（共15分）
24.人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括： ⒈第一次……的整个过程； ⒉你的感受。 要求：
⒈词数：80 —100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； ⒉文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time … 【答案】 The first time to make money
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to make money. The summer vacation began. I decided to work to make money for the next term. But I didn't know what work I could do.
At that time, my mother was writing a book. I decided to type for her for pay. She agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.
I began to work. I typed so slowly that I could type only several hundred words a day. It was a hard job for me. I kept typing all day long.
I finished the work two weeks later. I came to know how hard it was to make money. 【考点】其他类作文
【解析】【分析】这篇写第一次挣钱，可知句子的时态用一般过去时。在书写时语句要通顺，语言要精炼，流畅，在书写的过程中不要出现语法和拼写错误。
【点评】这篇短文写出了自己第一次挣钱的目的和挣钱的过程及感受。文章的层次清楚，逻辑关系合理，文章使用了常用的句式结构，容易理解。文章还使用了常用的短语例如，decide to do; make money； at that time; pay...for...;begin to do sth.; keep doing sth. all day long; come to know.此处文章还使用了固定句式结构It is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.和含有宾语从句的主从复合句But I didn't know what work I could do.
2018
61. 书面表达
现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就 此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因； 2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响； 3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇：be short of 缺少
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now 【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.
I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and
absolutely necessary.
【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英 语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
2017
九、书面表达（共15分）
70．某英语杂志社对部分中学生的周末活动做了问卷调查（结果如图），请你写一篇英语短文 参加征文活动．
内容包括：
1．简要描述调查结果．
2．谈一谈中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末（至少两条）． 要求：1．词数：80﹣100．开头已给出，不计入总词数． 2．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
We did a survey about middle school students'weekend activities．Here are the results． 【考点】S3：图表作文． 【分析】【高分句型一】
They think it can make them relax他们认为能让他们放松． think后是省略了that的宾语从句． 【高分句型二】
weekend is a good time for us to have a good rest周末是我们好好休息的好时间． 动词不定式做后置定语．
【解答】We did a survey about middle school students'weekend activities．Here are the results．Most of them have to do homework because they have too much schoolwork.35% of the students like playing computer games．They think it can make them relax．【高分句型一】Some students enjoy reading on the weekend．The others do some other things，like listening to music，visiting parents and so on．（调查结果．）
In my opinion，weekend is a good time for us to have a good rest．【高分句型二】But as students，we may as well set aside some time to review what we have learned in school．I would like to arrange time like this：in the mornings，we should do our homework； in the afternoons，we can have sports or help with some housework，or even go shopping with our parents； in the evenings，we can watch TV or surf the Internet for a while．（中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末）
In this way，we can lay a solid foundation for our future development and enjoy ourselves．
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