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【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily. As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.
Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.
【解析】这篇作文给出的写作背景是：你们学校英文报刊在以Building a Harmonious Class为题征文，你来为校刊投稿，谈一谈如何创建一个和谐的班集体、你通常是怎么做的以及你还需要做什么。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目中只给出了话题和大概的一个提纲，具体的写作内容需要我们自己思考，发挥想象力来充实完成。因此首先我们要仔细思考这个问题，结合自己的真实生活，想一想平时是怎么做的，应该怎么做。这是写作中的一个难点。另外一个难点是使用正确的英语将自己的所想表达出来，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时，不能逐词去翻译，而应从文章、句子的整体考虑，首先确定这篇短文使用什么人称、时态来叙述；可能用到哪些词汇、短语和句型，每个句子应以简单句为基础，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构，然后再变化成较高级、复杂是句型，如复合句、非谓语动词形式等。另外还应注意语句之间的连接，使用恰当的连词或副词，使文意衔接紧密、意思连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、充实。作者根据题目要求就如何创建和谐班级发表了自己的看法。短文中作者结合了自己日常生活中的所作所为，使文章的内容非常真实。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章中以第一人称为主、一般现在时态来叙述，符合题目要求。语法规范，句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整文章结构，使用复杂句型、短文和较高级的句型，提升了文章的档次。这些较好的句型和短语有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help them.等等。
14．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。
提示词语:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time 提示问题: What's your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?
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【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.
On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily.
I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，根据话题要求来介绍一下中国的传统节日。根据所提供的提示词语可知，要求介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节。可以从你最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢中秋节三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意在给报社的投稿中必须包含提示词语中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语把所给的提示问题回答清楚就行。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在节日里，我们会从不同的地方回家，和全家团聚，一起吃大餐。由and连接的并列句。 【高分句型二】
I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，而且因为它是一个家庭聚会时间，我真的很享受家庭成员之间的爱。句子中运用了not only…… but also……，还有because引导的原因状语从句。
15．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
某英语教育网站正在举办有关分享的主题征文活动，请你根据图示内容，结合自己的经历写一篇题为“Sharing”的英语短文。
注意：
1.短文需包括图示内容，并适当发挥。
2.词数80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Sharing
It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other.
【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like QQ or Wechat.
Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot.
In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions. 【解析】
此篇书面表达的话题是“分享”。首先我们根据给出的图表确定要写的内容的提纲，包括：分享什么？为什么分享？怎么分享？然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键词，列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达，拓展思维，写出自己的看法。最后，我们还要注意“分享”的情感教育，让我们学有所获。文章时态要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
16．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你的笔友 John 将作为交换生在中国家庭生活一周，他写了一封 e-mail 注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
向你求助。请根据邮件内容写封回信。 Dear Li Hua,
I will come to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do? Please write back soon. Yours, John Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don't need to worry about it.
If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It's not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that. In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means \so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What's more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings. I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，回信给约翰，建议他在中国家庭生活应注意的事项。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It's not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉他不必担心，接下来回答他的问题以及建议他
如何做，最后希望他在中国玩得高兴。此处need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
17．（·全国中考模拟）假如你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。
1. 没有阅读的习惯，不知道读什么。 阅读现状 2. 作业太多，没有足够的时间阅读。 3. 宁愿把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上。 你的情况 你的想法 热爱阅读，学校阅读俱乐部的成员。从阅读中获得了很多知识。自去年9月以来，已看了10多本书。 …… 注意事项：
1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.在“你的想法”一栏中须围绕主题，用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3.词数在90个左右，短文的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. Come on, everyone! Let’s start reading now! 【答案】Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on computer games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on! Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!
【解析】 这是一篇图表，你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。动笔前先要认
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