【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120个单词就“对公众开放文物建筑”这一话题，阐述你的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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【答案】With more input into cultural heritage protection, cultural heritage buildings to the public are encouraged to be opened to the public to better bring these buildings’ cultural and social value into play.
I am in favour of this practice. The value of such buildings mainly lies in two aspects. First, they are of archaeological significance; second, they inherit and spread traditional culture and thus promote cultural transmission. If a heritage building is closed, only the first aspect is made use of.
Only opening heritage buildings can fully display their social value, and to make them so is the best way for us to show our respect for such
buildings. Besides, opening cultural heritage buildings to the public can best satisfy their demands for spiritual life, thus benefiting the generations to come.
In short, opening cultural heritage buildings to the public is a win-win situation. Only in this way can we inherit our cultural heritages better.
【解析】这是一篇读写任务。首先，考生应认真阅读所给短文，正确理解文章内容，并要以精炼的语言概括文章的大意。注意，不要进行细节陈述，只要简要概括即可。其次，考生要就文章主题提出自己的看法，要给出具体的理由或者举出例证来证明自己的观点。这一部分给了作者比较大的写作自由，同时也有一定的难度。考生可以先写出主题句，列出提纲，然后再补充细节内容。
亮点说明：所给范文要点齐全，内容充实，条理清楚，点面齐全。first，second，besides，in short的使用使文章叙述条理清楚。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和句式：1. 被动语态：cultural heritage buildings to the public are encouraged to be opened to the public 2. with复合结构：With more input into cultural heritage protection 3. 倒装句：Only in this way can we inherit our cultural heritages better. 4. 精彩词汇：lies in two aspects, of archaeological significance, In short, a win-win situation.
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