英语医学科研论文摘要写作
标题(Title)
Titles are to be written to be understood by those in your field, telling them exactly wha
t you have done in your work.(告诉你
的同行确切研究了什么)
无论何种形式的标题,都是为了达到本文开始所说的标题写作的三个基本要求:简明扼要、信息丰富、便于索引。
1) Short and concise(简明扼要):Write in one line (not a sentence); not containing an active verb; not
exceeding 25 words or 120-140 letters and spaces; no abbreviations or
chemical symbols except those that are generally accepted, e.g. DNA, RNA, AIDS, CT, etc.;
2)Informative(信息丰富):State
exactly what you want the reader to know about your paper and your work; 3)Indexing(便于索引):Pack as many key words or indexing terms as possible into the title without overloading it; key words not in the title will be in the abstract or can go in the \section of the paper; key words are usually in the beginning or ending place of the title. 要求尽量把关键词(索引词)安排在标题最前面或最后面的位置上 根据以上三条基本原则,注意观察对以下标题的修改: 示例:
1)视网膜小血管变化是冠状动脉疾病的一个指标
Original: Retinal arteriolar
changes are an indicator of coronary artery disease
问题:标题中应尽量避免使用活用动词 (active verb), 即谓语动词,一般采用名词短语型结构。
Revised: Retinal arteriolar
changes as an indicator of coronary artery disease
2) 用大剂量氨甲喋呤治疗急性淋巴细胞白血病的初步体会
Original: Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to treat ALL
问题:(1) 应尽量避免使用\初步体会\,\初步研究\,\初步经验\之类没有实际意义的词; (2) 除了像AIDS, DNA等已通用的缩略语外,标题中应尽量避免使用缩略语,如
ALL应写全称;(3)尽量避免使用动词 Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia 或:Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia
3) 关于饮食中钾含量与血压关系的研究
Original: A research of the
relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure
问题:(1)具体的研究一般用study表述 (research一般作不可数名词处理,如much research has been done on…);标题中如果\研究\一词前没有限定词,一般都省略,比较:A prospective clinical study of isoniazid-refampicin-pyrazinamide-induced liver injury in an area endemic for hepatitis;(2)表述过于繁琐
Revised: Dietary potassium and
blood pressure
为了满足标题写作的上述,有时对较长标题可采用副标题(subtitle)处理,如出现:
1)病例数时,如:对急症室连续170例腹痛病例的回顾性研究
Original: A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal pain in the emergency room 问题:关键词不突出
Revised: Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study of 170 consecutive cases
2) 研究性质/方法时,如:用磁共振成象术对正常怀孕期间垂体增大进行活体内研究
Original: Use MRI to conduct an in vivo study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy
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