高考作文复习资料---2{待续}

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高考作文素材：?结束,还是开始??升格作文例谈································2 高考作文素材：?生活中的一朵浪花?病文诊断及升格作文························4 高考作文素材：半命题作文?夏天的_____?导写································6 高考作文素材：半命题作文?做一个_____的人?导写···························7 高考作文素材：材料作文 ?自己不倒，啥都能过去?导写························8 高考作文素材：材料作文?呼唤?构思演练····································10 高考作文素材：材料作文?鲫鱼与螃蟹的对话?导写····························12 高考作文素材：材料作文?老人摔倒,你会扶吗??导写··························13 高考作文素材：材料作文?老音乐家铡草?导写································15 高考作文素材：材料作文?聆听的美好?导写··································16 高考作文素材：材料作文?爬山虎的失落?构思演练····························17 高考作文素材：材料作文?清华校长卡壳之失?导写····························19 高考作文素材：材料作文?顺应水流?导写····································20 高考作文素材：材料作文?说‘禁补令’?导写·································23 高考作文素材：材料作文?网络用语?导写····································24 高考作文素材：材料作文?无意间造就辉煌?导写······························25 高考作文素材：材料作文?咸与淡?导写······································27 高考作文素材：材料作文?阳光\\花朵\\净水般的语言?导写······················28 高考作文素材：多则材料作文?合作.独立?导写·······························31 高考作文素材：关系型命题作文?主流?与?另类?导写························32 高考作文素材：话题作文?90?后的?豪哥?导写······························34 高考作文素材：话题作文?从?人’字看人生?构思演练························36 高考作文素材：话题作文?激情/理智? 构思演练······························38 高考作文素材：话题作文?陪读?导写········································41 高考作文素材：话题作文?生活情趣? 构思演练······························· 44 高考作文素材：话题作文?态度与命运?导写··································49 高考作文素材：漫画作文?现在流行种大树?导写······························52 高考作文素材：命题作文?底气?导写········································53 高考作文素材：漫画作文?走自己的路?导写··································55 高考作文素材：命题作文?青春的细节?导写··································57 高考作文素材：命题作文?让我走近你?导写··································58 高考作文素材：命题作文?岁月留痕?导写····································60 高考作文素材：命题作文?幸福之道?导写····································63 高考作文素材：新材料作文?从时代的舞台走过?导写··························65 高考作文素材：新材料作文?荆棘鸟的传说?导写······························66 高考作文素材：新材料作文?推一车瓦器过山岭?导写··························69 高考作文素材：新材料作文?欲望?导写······································70 高考作文素材：哲理材料作文?站得高,看得远?导写···························72

“结束,还是开始?”

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篮球巨星姚明在被记者问到是否想过“这就是结束了”的时候，姚明回答道：“永远没有‘结束’，就算结束了，也是个崭新的开始。”据此写一篇800字作文。 【学生习作及评改意见】

永远没有“结束”

【评改：题目只体现“结束”，没有体现辩证的另一方面，最好改为：“结束，还是开始？”】

①马克思哲学告诉我们，这个世界是对立与联系的世界。正如姚明的回答：“永远没有结束，就算结束，也只是个崭新的开始。”

【评：第1段的导入很重要，要尽量吸引阅卷老师的眼球，本文的导入太生硬了些，缺乏亮点。】

②过往的历史，仅仅只是个开始。

③过往的历史，又谈何开始？四大文明古国，各有自己传奇精异的文化，而无断代延续至今的只有中华文明。然而其他文化就真断代无传了吗？显然不，古国们的灿烂文化以另一种文化形式在传承，在发展。结束的旧事物，以积极的面貌加入了新事物，开始了一段崭新的旅程。如古印度文明，真的无存了吗？若是，印度人又怎会有着坚实的信仰，特有的风俗，异人的言谈呢？永远没有“结束”，它正是个崭新的开始，以不同以往的面貌，迎接世人。

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