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4）范文

Why do College Students Have Difficulty in Finding Jobs?

In recent years college graduates are facing greater challenge in job markets. To avoid such an embarrassment, many students even choose to further their study to wait for another three years for a possible job opportunity. The reasons for the employment difficulties lie in the following three aspects. Firstly, the enlarged college enrollment supplies more than enough graduates with a certain specialty. There has been an overabundance of executive secretaries, lawyers, etc. Therefore in the contest for a single position by tens of hundreds of graduates, most will suffer the failure. Secondly, job-finding difficulty also comes from the curricular design of many colleges. They have not adjusted their majors and subjects to meet the demand of modern society, so that students cannot find a position in the market to apply their knowledge in practice. Thirdly, I believe the difficulties also come from graduates themselves. The job demands are quite unbalanced between developed areas. A large number of graduates would rather stay jobless in big cities than take positions in small or underdeveloped cities. Taking all these reasons into account, we’d like to suggest that the government should have a micromanagement in college enrollment and major design, and students should have a broader and more reasonable view about careers.

4．观点论证类作文

这是TEM-4作文的命题形式之一，他们或者以一个疑问句的形式出现，如“Is money all powerful？”或者在情景中交代一种社会现象或一种做法，让读者发表观点，标志为“Do you agree or disagree?” “What’s your opinion?” 如：“Most high-level jobs are done by men. Some people think the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. Do you agree or disagree?”

1) 结构模板（当作文题目只出现单方面的观点时） 第一段：引题，或者描述一个情景，或者提出别人对这一问题的观点来引出主体。或者反转法（turnabout）,引出和别人相反的观点；或者顺承别人的观点或表明同意。 第二段：观点段，承接首段观点，对本段内容加以限制；观点不同方面的体现+证明，解释，说明。 第三段：回顾，总结观点，一般会有一个引导的词或是短语+回顾点题的句子。 2）可变通的语言模板 ? (paraphrase of the situation in the direction) Some people suggest/hold/think/claim/believe/suggest/insist that ? I agree/disagree with this opinion because?for the following two/three reasons. Firstly，? Secondly,?Last but not least To sum up, I have outlined the advantages/disadvantage of ?I believe that? 3) 典型题眼

① Is Money All Powerful?

② Is Thrift Necessary in Modern Society? ③ Do You Agree with “Euthanasia”?

④ What’s your opinion about reducing children’s excessive assignment?

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4）范文 My View on Man-Made Beauty The Chinese traditional saying “Clothes make a person” reflects the importance of “appearance”. Nowadays, such a belief has its new content. Many people, especially young girls or ladies, are not content with getting more beautiful by clothes. They turn to a more challenging practice of physiological reform to make them man-made beauties. I don’t think this practice should be advocated.

The desire or beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The operations may really mean something to some people. At least they turn more beautiful. But a coin has two sides, and so does the made-made beauty practice for the two following reasons. Firstly, one’s appearance is the God’s blessing, and has been one part of our life. The reform of the original physiological structure may bring great harm to our body. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, the advocating for such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc., which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contests about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty.

Concerning the above possible harms the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty. 5．提出建议，解决问题类作文 1) 典型题眼

① One Way to Solve the Problem(1998) ② The Best Way to Save Power

③ One Way to Solve Transportation Problem

④ How to get along well with roommates in the dormitory? 2）结构模板

第一段：（1）引出所要解决的问题及其严重性或必要性 （2）明确提出建议 第二段：承接首段观点，对本段内容加以限制，即建议从哪个角度，哪个方面讲能解决问题。 角度一（方面一）用推理，举例等方面拓展自己的观点。 角度二（方面二）用推理，举例等方面拓展自己的观点。 第三段：做出结论，建议行动，展望建议实施后的前景。 3）可变通的语言模板 ① ? has become a serious problem in ? To solve the problem, many and varied proposals have been presented, like? My advice is that ? can be a good way to solve the problem. ?may contribute to the solution to?for the two reasons. The first reason is that?can? The second reason is that ? From the above evidence, we can easily see the effect ? may bring us in the solving problem of ? We are expecting? - 17 -

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② Modern people place more emphasis upon the importance of ____. And several ways are proposed to ___, such as ____. For my part, the best way to ____. On the one hand, ____help(s) to ____. It is of vital significance for _____. What’s more, ____ promote(s)_____. On the other hand, _____. From what has been discussed that. The absence of ether will in no sense result in _____.

4) 范文 The Best Way to Solve Power Insufficiency

Every year, especially in summer, power insufficiency troubles production and our life. Many and varied proposals are presented to solve this problem. Some people suggest building more power plants to alleviate the insufficient power resources. Some others suggest saving electricity consumption to ease the heavy burden. I agree with the latter and my specific advice is that turning up air-conditions one or two degree higher is the best way to solve this problem.

This suggestion is based on the following two facts. Firstly, it does save a large amount of power. According to the statistics about the power consumption in East China in 2004, more than 30% of it came from air0conditions from hotels, shopping malls, office buildings, pubic entertaining places, and our ordinary families. To make them feel comfortable, people turn air-conditions on almost all day and even night long at a rather low temperature. Suppose one or two degree is turn up, the whole amount of electricity consumed would get down. Secondly, we believe it is the best way to solve power insufficiency also in that it will help people to establish thrift awareness. Many problems including power sufficiency are caused by waste. If young children learn to save every unit of power and every citizen learn to take social responsibility, in the long run, power insufficiency and many other problems will be solved forever.

From the above evidence, we can easily see the effect of the advocate for turning up air-conditions a little higher. We expect everyone will be the expert of saving energy.

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六．掌握TEM-4 作文的命题范围

1．校园生活五大看点：学习，活动，考试，就业，校园现象 -- 上大学的目的是什么？

— 学习期间的最大压力是什么？

— 课外活动，课外打工的意义是什么？

— 和同学（室友）和谐相处最重要的是什么？

— 毕业时如何面试？什么样的职业？到什么地方就业？继续读书还是马上工作？ — 大学期间如何理财？ — 如何看待大学生谈恋爱？ — 如何看待大学生结婚解禁？ 经典表达： 大学的意义 What we desire in a college is much more than a degree, nor a job prospect, but a chance to get high education. It is an education for a civilized mind. Namely, the business of college is not only to train us, but to put us in touch with what the best human minds have thought. Through reading books, man’s peculiar accomplishment, we add to our human experience and enter the worlds we have not the time to travel in literal time. Reading Shakespeare, for example, we have the experience of Shakespeare, which takes us into his world. A civilized mind is, in essence, one that contains many such lives and many such worlds. 考试作弊 According to a recent poll, 65 percent of college students have admitted cheating on exams at least once. To deal with the widespread dishonesty in examination, some educators advocate a trusting practice, in which no invigilate keeps watching students in exam, showing much trust in students. One conspicuous argument is that distrust can be contagious; some efforts to prevent cheating may actually encourage cheating – a person may feel “they don’t trust me anyway,” and be tempted to “beat the system.” This practice has turned out effective in preventing cheating on exam. 大学生结婚 The decision by the educational department that college students are permitted to marry has aroused a heated discussion. Some people for the decision base their argument on the law about the age of marriage. They hold that any citizen beyond 24 has the right to get married no matter what identity he/she has. Others against the decision hold that the permission will affect college students in the following three aspects. Firstly, marriage life is time consuming and it will tear students away from learning, students’ main task. Secondly, marriage life is money-consuming and it will exert more burden on their families besides tuition when students have no ability to support themselves. Thirdly, the permission is very likely to promote some unpleasant incidents on campus. Admiring others’ marriage life, some students are likely to find temporary companions hastily to get rid of the loneliness. Thus things like living together and even pregnancy are very likely to happen. 2．社会与家庭六大看点：社会规范，社会生活，社会问题，家庭模式，家庭关系，家庭教育 — 交流促进社会关系的重要方法

— 你认为解决城市交通的最好方法是什么？开辟道路？减少车辆？ — 你对公共场合吸烟，高声打电话又什么看法？

— 如何看待这些浪费现象：饭店里剩菜剩饭，水龙头不关紧，空调温度调得过低？ — 关于贫困，作为学生你能够做什么？

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— 家庭模式有哪些? 你喜欢哪一种？

— 家庭关系：怎样看待代沟？能消除吗？解决办法是什么？

— 家庭教育：表扬还是惩罚？孩子和游戏；孩子的零用钱；孩子和兴趣班。 经典表达 公共场合打电话 In public, such as libraries, cinemas, and department stores, we can find such slogans as “no smoking” and “no spitting”. But we never find such thing as “no loud calling”. Yes, it is people’s right to make a cellphone call in public, but a loud call is quite troublesome. The most serious problem is that it interferes in others. When you call loudly, others are forced to share your stories though what they need is quietness. A loud call may distract people form what they are reading, may interrupt their movie appreciation, and may make them irritable and restless in making purchase decision. So when you enjoy the convenience a cellphone brings to you, try not to bring incontinence to others. Should Lucky Numbers be Auctioned? “So many people, so many minds”. It is the same case for the answers to the question: should lucky numbers be auctioned? Some people may argue that lucky numbers should be auctioned so that the money from auction can be used to improve the public welfare. Namely, we use the money of the rich to do the good to the public without any loss. However, this seemingly convincing opinion can be challenged in many ways. Lucky numbers should not be auctioned. For one thing, such a practice may encourage superstition. Numbers are only symbols, but in Chinese tradition they are attached some special meanings to. Superstitiously, some people try to avoid 4, for its pronunciation happens to coincide with that of another Chinese character “si”, meaning “die”. 6 and 9 are viewed as lucky numbers. If auction is permitted, numbers must be previously decided lucky or not. In this way, the superstitious implication of numbers will be rationalized and made public. For another, the practice may produce inequality of social wealth. Numbers are the social wealth, and every person has the right to enjoy them. However auction for lucky numbers will make the rich have more chances to have the so-called lucky numbers; in this way others’ rights will be deprived of. Therefore, auction indirectly encourages the inequality among people. These are only parts of our arguments against auctioning lucky numbers, but from the evidence we have presented, we can naturally come to the conclusion that for the sake of the healthy development of the society, no auction of lucky numbers should be allowed.

3．科技与媒体六大看点：媒体，网络，书籍，电脑，手机，电视 — 计算机利弊，优缺点，用途

— 计算机代替人脑，计算机翻译代替英语学习 — 互联网的利弊

— 通信手段：电话，手机，电子邮件，写信 — 娱乐渠道：电视，电影，网络

— 信息手段：读书（书籍，报刊，漫画）与读图（电视），广告 — 科学技术评论

经典表达 Electronic Dictionaries Will Not Kill Printed Dictionaries A large number of students are using electronic dictionaries to study English. They hold that it is light to carry and convenient to find the meaning of a new word. Some people even - 20 -

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