Basic WritingLetter of Recommendation 建议信写作
Do you know the name of this building? Guangzhou Tower Where is it?
It’s in Guangzhou.
What problem will you have If you spend too much time watching TV?
内容广州全接触 中学生英语节目
播放时间
嘉宾
预期效果
Short-sightedness
include/cover V.包括 1.这个清单包括了许多著名作家的名字 The list includes the names of many famous writers
2.他阅读的书籍涉及许多不同的学科。His reading covers many different subjects.
1.broadcast v.&n.播放,广播 他们每天都向当地听众播送新闻节目 They broadcast the news to the local people every day
2.It is convenient for sb to do sth方便某人做 某事 你今晚出来方便吗?
Is it convenient for you to go out tonight?
stimulate V.刺激,激励Stimulate one’s interest 激发某人的兴趣 老师应该激发学生的兴趣来学英语 Teachers should stimulate their students’interest to learn English
1.improve v.提高,改善(能力,技术,水平) 1)他说他要提高足球技术。 He said he was going to improve his football.2)你应该提高你的英语水平 You should improve your English. 2. be welcomed by /be popular with/among sb.受到….欢迎 柴静新作很受广大读者欢迎. The new book written by Chaijing is welcomed by readers.
Can you find the suggestion about shortsightedness(近视)in the following passage?
Last weekend I interviewed Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the problem short-sightedness. According to Professor Wang, a bit more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it, ranking first in the world. Related experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and there is no medicine to cure for it at present. It is suggested that we students should not overuse our eyes and participating in more outdoor activities is beneficial to our eye health . In addition, another tip from the experts is that the short-sightedness has relation to how we hold the pen while writing.
It is suggested that we students should not overuse our eyes and participating in more outdoor activities is beneficial to our eye health . Suggest表建议,后面从句要用 虚拟语气(should+动词原形, should 可以省略)
1.建议罗伯特到芝加哥去,设法在那里找个工 作 It is suggested that Robert (should) go to Chicago and try to find a job there.
2.我建议把李明派往南方。I suggest that Liming (should)be sent to south
实战演练 广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观 众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。 现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。 [写作内容] 假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信: 节目内容 :介绍广州的历史、教育、著名景
点、饮食、名人 播放时间: 每周六、日,方便学生周末观看 其他设想: 邀请中学生参加节目,提高学生的收看兴趣 开办理由:1.中学生可以更多地了解广州文化,以便向外国游 客介绍广州 2.有助于提高中学生的英语水平 预期效果: 将会受到中学生的欢迎
Dear John, I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. ... I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua
[例题导写]1、审题:养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写 作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要文章的体裁 文章的主题 第几人称 建议信,应用文 建议开办节目 第一人称 一般现在时、将来时 委婉
时态语气
2、信息重组我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子:
①节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。
②建议每周六、日播放,方便学生周末观看。③建议邀请中学生参加节目, 激发学生的收看兴趣。 ④这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化, 还有助于提高 中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。
⑤我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。
3.难句翻译,翻译下列句子并合成一句 句2:1)建议(这个节目将于) 每周六、日(播放)。 It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends. 2)方便学生周末观看。 We students can have the chance to watch it. /It will be convenient for us students to watch it. 因果关系, 可以使用so that句型
合并:It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.
句3: (你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。 You can also invite some middle school students to take part in the program. (这样会)激发学生的收看兴趣。 It will surely stimulate other students’ interest in it.
补充说明关系, 可以使用which 非限制性定语从句
合并:You can also invite some middle school students to take part in the program, which will surely stimulate other students’ interest in it.
句4:1) (这个节目帮助) 中学生可以更多 地了解广州文化。 This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou. 2) (中学生可以) 向外国游客介绍广州。 The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. 3) (这个节目) 有助于提高中学生的英语水平。 This program helps students improve their English.
合并:Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.
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