1.1.2
A.
:Comment
Therearesevenspellingmistakesinthefirstextract.Andinthesecondletterextract,thesentenceistoolongandconfusingtothereaders.
Improvement:
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InoticedyouradvertisementintheDailyPlanetandIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsendmefurtherinformationaboutyourproducts.
MycompanyisconsideringsubcontractingsomeofitsofficeservicesandIbelievethatyoumaybeabletosupplyuswithasuitableservice.
Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yoursfaithfully,
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ThereareanumberofqueriesthatIwouldliketoraiseaboutyourproducts.IwouldbegratefulifyoucouldaskarepresentativetogetintouchwithmesothatIcandiscussthesequeries.
Hopefully,Iwillbeabletoplaceanorderifthequeriesaresatisfactorilyanswered.
Yoursfaithfully,
B.ELECTRICALAPPLIANCESCO.
P.O.Box3259
XXXX,XXX
Yourref:TD/4812
Ourref:EA/2719
January22,1998
TheManager
Messrs.Clarke&.SmithCo.Ltd.
68HighStreet
LondonEC4
England
DearSir,
ThankyouforyourletterofJanuary17,askingusfordetailsandpricesofourelectricheaters.Pleasefindenclosedourlatestpricelistandcatalogue,togetherwithModelX4?sdetails.
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