manyofthephrasesusedintheletterarenotsoconventionaltothebusinessletterstyle.
,theletterisnotconciseenough.Besides
Improvement:DearMrBrown,
Thankyouverymuchforyourorder.
Unfortunately,incommonwithothersuppliers,ourpriceshaverisensinceyouplacedanorderwithustwoyearsago,butyouwillbepleasedtohearthatwewillsupplyyoucurrentorderattheoldprice.
Iencloseournewcatalogueandpricelists,whichcontainseveralexcitingnewproductsandourlatestprices.
Iwillkeepyoufullyinformedabouttheprogressofyourorder.Ifyouwouldliketogetintouchwithmeurgently,ournewfaxnumberis998321or,ofcourse,youmayprefertophoneme.
Yourssincerely,
1+*2(3'
SalesDirector
Unit3
3.1.1
C.
Thisletterisashortreplyandthewriterprovidesamatter?of?factstatementofthefactsofthesubjectcompany?screditstatusandbusinessactivities.Intheendoftheletter,thewriterwritesatactfulreminderthattheinformationofferedisconfidentialandthatnoresponsibilityforitcanbeaccepted.
3.1.2
A.
DearSirs,
ChinaNationalLightIndustrialCorporation,ShanghaiBranchhasreferredustoyoubankforinformationabouttheirbusinessandfinances.Weshallappreciateitifyouwilltellusabouttheirbusinessstandingandcreditstatus.
Wecanassureyouanyinformationyoumayprovideuswillbekeptinabsoluteconfidence.Weencloseanaddressandastampedenvelopeforyourreply.
Thankyouinadvanceforyourhelp.
,Yoursrespectfully
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